Literature
Chapter One (Critique Appreciated)
"Mom, I'm going shopping. Do you wanna come along?"I shouted as i headed out the door.
"No thanks sweetie, you go on ahead.,"my mom called back.
"Okay, I will see you whenever I get back, bye."
"Wait, do you have your cell phone?"
"Yes, Mom. BYE."
Finally, out of the house and away from my parents for once. I knew of a few small shops that I wanted to visit, but the main place i was going to, a huge supercenter located ten minutes from my house. I had only been to one when i need supplies for a project and was usually rushed through the store so we could leave as soon as possible. So I would finally get a chance to roam the store for hours w